brynimation's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Dad]

Your animation has improved loads since your last cartoon! Awesome work Northridge!

NorthridgeNG responds:

Thank you Bryn!

[How to catch a charmander]

Wow, it's really great for your first animation. Even though it isn't incredible, for your first time using Flash it's very impressive, specifically the special effects like the blood and the part where the pokeball catches charmander. I know we talked about this over email, but for next time, put more motion into your characters. Other than that, great job, especially for a first attempt!
Bryn

superjuice responds:

thanks, I'll definitely keep those tips in mind! I know it's not incredible, but your support really motivates me. thanks, dude!
ETHAN

[The Duck]

Hi siquator! Welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a great website, and I wish you the best of luck in the future. Anyway, let me try to give some on ow to improve:
First of all, I understand that this is a test, and is probably one of your first animations, and if so, it is a very good start. But, the tweens could have been faster (like when he hits the wall) it would have been better if you added some recoil to the hit, and maybe a motion blur just before he hits the wall. And, the drawing could have used improvement, and the line work could have as well. If you don't already, I recommend getting a tablet. I used a bamboo fun for 4 years, and it was so much better than a mouse, 1 week ago I saved up enough money to get a 12 inch cintiq. Any tablet is better than nothing. I think that if you stick at this, you could be great! But the newgrounds reviews will seem quite harsh, so if you get criticism, don't worry, it'll just drive you to improve even further! Good luck!
Bryn

siquator responds:

Thanks for the view!

Yes, the art and animation was far from top notch, I know, it makes me so frustrated that my work done on paper can be so good....but with a mouse....not so much. and Yes, I am investing in a tablet soon, watching tutorials everyday, animating drawing, I'm getting better.

Thanks again for the criticism,

-Mike

[My First Lip Sync Attempt]

Considering this is your first lip sync test, then it is very good, much better than my first go, haha. But it does look a little bit strange, and almost goofy, because all the mouths are different sizes and shapes. What I do is I draw one mouth and then convert it into a movie clip/graphic so I am able to re-use it over and over again, rather than re-drawing it over and over.
But anyway, it was very good for your first go well done.
Bryn.

JiiKim responds:

Thanks dude, Yeah I tried that out but for some reason I picture that frame by frame looks much better. I will try that out though.

[Thank you Edd.]

Wow. Even though I'm a child this video has really spoken to me. Edd Gould was a fantastic animator and a wonderful human being. He inspired me too. And I agree with you. He will definetly inspire thousands apon thousands of people for many years. Rest In Piece Edd.

Yusuf responds:

Rest in peace Edd

[Hammer & Fail 2]

WWWWWOOOOOOOWWWW!!!

THIS IS AMAZING EDD! I have wachted this 4 times on newgrounds and 5 times on youtube.
Awesome just awesome it was definetly worth the wait!

eddsworld responds:

Hah, thanks Bryn :)